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three, four,
as high as you can go,
like skyscrapers on the prairies
(urban centers for city slicker bees in the country)

sweat clutching clothes to skin, sticky (but not
sweet) like the honey on your gloves from the
wax that you used to fill a hole in the front side

and he was up before the sun, before
the bees fanned their wings and set
their internat gps for the canola field
one mile west (down past the yard where

the dead man's scrap metal was looted)
:iconthe-balcony-scene:
prompt 39: work. (archive [link])

i work a bee farm! also...too many parentheses?
:iconlondonrey:
i personally like the parentheses.
you're interesting. (:
your writing unsettles me, like i just got to look inside your brain.
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:iconthe-balcony-scene:
~the-balcony-scene Jul 11, 2011  Student Writer
oh, good. i quite love parentheses, but i'm always nervous when i use them.
and thank you (: i like the idea of being interesting with unsettling writing, haha.
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:iconlondonrey:
Yes, unsettling in a good way though. (:
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